Wednesday, 10 June 2015

The End



Learning Reflection
I am learning to write a detailed recount about the ANZAC landings.
I am so proud of being able to do this all by myself.
It can be tricky to think of a good title and hook.
The teacher can help me by giving me ideas and pointing out my mistakes
The next step for me is to do this again on another topic

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.